Peer Reviews
What specific elements of the film opening did you like? |
Was there anything that left you confused? (be specific) |
What suggestions do you have for changes? |
I like the plot and
Ms. Hall made it better. |
There were some
filler clips that made the end of the video a little awkward. |
Give Ms. Hall one
speaking line at the end to make it an award winning film. |
I liked Mrs. Hall's
performance in the film and the suspense |
I was confused on why
they showed the kids at lunch |
I suggest that you
add some more intense music and make it a bit louder |
The way the plot
mixes current news and the traditional plot of poisoning. I loved the plot,
it was so creative and so fun to watch. |
N/A |
I would maybe add
colorings or filters. Maybe it can start off bright and the more into the
film, the less color. I also think different sounds should be used to help
portray contrast behind Ms. Hall's character. |
I liked the title
card near the end. |
Why were the masks
that Cayley used inconsistent? What was Ms. Hall putting on these masks to
cause people like Cayley to faint. |
Label the vials Ms.
Hall is using with like a skull and crossbones. And maybe rerecord some of
the shots with Caylee using the same masks as earlier. |
I liked how there
were different scenes in an order that was not in chronological order |
While I like the
approach, the storyline was a little confusing as it left me wondering why
the one student in particular was poisoned |
Add in more context
about what this student did to anger the teacher and replace the many scenes
of Ms.Hall mixing the chemicals with this context. |
I really liked the
concept of the film, it was a very ambitious idea |
the clip placements.
The clips seemed like they were placed in a unorganized way. It didn't make
sense and me being the viewer I was a bit confused throughout the film. In
additing, the text. the text that kept showing up at the bottom were flashy
and distracting , I would suggest getting a more stable text with stable
transition. Lastly, the sound was distracting you could tell there was a
sound on top of the sound you had. Make sure you go into imovie or whatever
editing platform you are using and take off the original sound and add the
sound you want. Otherwise it's not gonna sound good |
Change the sound, fix
the clips, and get rid of the flashy text at the bottom of the screen |
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