Peer Reviews

 

What specific elements of the film opening did you like?

Was there anything that left you confused? (be specific)

What suggestions do you have for changes?

I like the plot and Ms. Hall made it better.

There were some filler clips that made the end of the video a little awkward.

Give Ms. Hall one speaking line at the end to make it an award winning film.

I liked Mrs. Hall's performance in the film and the suspense

I was confused on why they showed the kids at lunch

I suggest that you add some more intense music and make it a bit louder

The way the plot mixes current news and the traditional plot of poisoning. I loved the plot, it was so creative and so fun to watch.

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I would maybe add colorings or filters. Maybe it can start off bright and the more into the film, the less color. I also think different sounds should be used to help portray contrast behind Ms. Hall's character.

I liked the title card near the end.

Why were the masks that Cayley used inconsistent? What was Ms. Hall putting on these masks to cause people like Cayley to faint.

Label the vials Ms. Hall is using with like a skull and crossbones. And maybe rerecord some of the shots with Caylee using the same masks as earlier.

I liked how there were different scenes in an order that was not in chronological order

While I like the approach, the storyline was a little confusing as it left me wondering why the one student in particular was poisoned

Add in more context about what this student did to anger the teacher and replace the many scenes of Ms.Hall mixing the chemicals with this context.

I really liked the concept of the film, it was a very ambitious idea

the clip placements. The clips seemed like they were placed in a unorganized way. It didn't make sense and me being the viewer I was a bit confused throughout the film. In additing, the text. the text that kept showing up at the bottom were flashy and distracting , I would suggest getting a more stable text with stable transition. Lastly, the sound was distracting you could tell there was a sound on top of the sound you had. Make sure you go into imovie or whatever editing platform you are using and take off the original sound and add the sound you want. Otherwise it's not gonna sound good

Change the sound, fix the clips, and get rid of the flashy text at the bottom of the screen


The main problems identified by my peers is the inconsistency with Cayley's masks in shots and a lack of context for what is going on in the film. We will refilm shots to add consistency to Cayley's scenes and to add more context to the antagonist's motive. 

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