What specific elements of the film opening did you like? Was there anything that left you confused? (be specific) What suggestions do you have for changes? I like the plot and Ms. Hall made it better. There were some filler clips that made the end of the video a little awkward. Give Ms. Hall one speaking line at the end to make it an award winning film. I liked Mrs. Hall's performance in the film and the suspense I was confused on why they showed the kids at lunch I suggest that you add some more intense music and make it a bit louder The way the plot mixes current news and the traditional plot of poisoning. I loved the plot, it was so creative and so fun to watch. N/A I would maybe add colorings or filters. Maybe it can start off bright and the more into the film, the less color. I also think different sounds should be used to help portray ...